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JURY REPORT
General
The jury was impressed by the range and variety of the 222
submissions from all over the world. The number of entries
was a record. Most students had thought very carefully about
site and climatic conditions, local culture and principles
of sustainability. Almost all entrants had carefully considered
the needs and character of the author for whom they had decided
to work, and most showed an interest in literature unusual
in a notoriously ill-read profession.
But the brief called for concern with detail, and not all
entries showed proper understanding of the tectonic qualities
of architecture. In some cases, there was lack of consistency
between drawings which, even interpreted in the most generous
manner, showed lack of three-dimensional understanding.
Yet such problems were exceptional. As a jury, we were (in
the end) unanimous in our choice of the first, second and
third prizes, and in selection of the best submission from
a student in the first or second years. Honorary mentions
have been made of entries to which we were unable to give
a prize, though they were impressive and often inventive.
All prize winning and mentioned projects are, in very different
ways, examples of placemaking and attempts to live in harmony
with the planet.
Winners
First prize (£1200):
Henry Williams, fourth year, University of Adelaide, Australia
The project is executed with great simplicity and clarity.
It has an extraordinary sensitive relationship to its site,
rolling downland studded with trees. Sensuous links between
writer and the surrounding grassland were very carefully considered,
with the house party dug into the slope, so that desk and
grass seem to grow together. It would undoubtedly be a calm
and tranquil place to work in.
The work is very well detailed and beautifully drawn, so
the textures and almost the smell of the materials are forcibly
projected from the boards. It is always difficult to present
the spatial, luminous and tectonic qualities of a minimalist
design on paper in two dimensions yet the entrant has managed
to do so admirably.
Second prize (£500):
Ujjval Tanchal + Sachin Soni, fifth year, School of Architecture
CEPT, Ahmedabad, India.
Group work prize (£200)
In contrast to the rural setting of the first prize-winning
project (and indeed the majority of entries) the authors of
the second prize-winning scheme chose to reinterpret the dense
texture of old Ahmedabad. The scheme takes its form from the
traditional tenement, illuminated and ventilated by chowks:
light wells penetrating the mass of the building.
The jury was convinced by the excellent arguments for the
design, and by the way in which the chowk of the tenement
had become the focus of the new work, which shows sequences
of space and light that are both appropriate to tradition
and the city, and to the calm and quiet a writer needs. Some
jury members were worried by the relative lack of technical
and environmental information about the design.
Third prize (£200):
Vongai PP Pasirayi, third year, National University of Science
and Technology, Bulawayo, Zimbabwe
The jury was impressed by the spatial and luminous qualities
of the third prize-winning project. It offers both comfort
and calm, and great experiential range within a small compass.
Relationships of interior spaces to the beautiful site were
particularly well considered. The brief was carefully and
inventively interpreted. But some jury members had reservations
about the external appearance of the house which, they thought,
seemed naïve and clumsy. Nevertheless, the house would
undoubtedly create a real and stimulating sense of place.
Prize for entrant in first or second year
(£200): Stephen Lammas, second year, UNITECH School
of Architecture,
Auckland, New Zealand
The affinity of this project to its magnificent site was thought
by the jury to be exceptional. The brief was clearly and economically
interpreted. Yet the design is far from minimalist, and it
would undoubtedly provide a series of small but very varied
and stimulating spaces for an active and fit writer.
Jury members were impressed in general by the number and
quality of entries from first and second year students, so
this prize was won against stiff competition.
Honorary mentions
Unathi Lincon, University of Port Elizabeth,
South Africa
Jurors were excited by the simplicity of the entry, and by
its re-interpretation of traditional South African township
forms, while providing a stimulating and (when necessary secluded)
place for the writer to work in. Balance between public and
private realms was very carefully considered.
Mia Visser, second year, University of
Pretoria, South Africa
The jury was very impressed with the drawings of this project,
which showed (as does the first-prize winner) and exceptional
ability to impart spatial and material qualities on paper.
But the choice of writer (Isabel Allende) seemed inappropriate
to a design so heavily influenced by the north, and the relationship
to the brief sometimes seemed a little vague.
William Paul Norris, second year Manchester
Metropolitan University, UK
This welcome urban entry makes creative use of an old brick
viaduct by suspending a lightweight studio under one of the
arches. The device of having a writing area which can be moved
to take advantage of season and time of day is ingenious and
could be stimulating. But argument about environmental control
seemed rather unconvincing, and planning was clumsy in places.
Mark Jooste, second year, University of
Pretoria, South Africa
A bold and deceptively simple approach to building on the
Sugarloaf Mountain which would undoubtedly be marvelous (if
hot) place to work in. But development of any kind in the
very sensitive area was regarded by some jury members as an
unfortunate precedent.
Too Wing, PD student, University of Hong
Kong, China
All jury members were impressed by the layered nature of this
re-interpretation of a Chinese urban site for the poet Li
Bai. The process of composition was admirable, but the proposal
was not sufficiently worked out in detail.
Rebecca Murphy, second year, Queensland
Institute of Technology, Australia
Few entrants paid more attention to the narrative of the client’s
life than is shown in this entry. The relationship between
artifact and surrounding bush is very well imagined, if somewhat
prosaically.
Foo Suk Yin, fifth year, University of
Tasmania, Launceston, Australia
As an exercise in the handling of light and space, this project
was outstanding for ingenuity and invention. But its planning
was oddly dull, and detail was not sufficiently explained.
Koji Misaki, fifth year, University of
Tsukubu Art and Design School, Japan
No jury member could resist the elegance and power of the
drawings of this scheme and their extremely interesting implications
for light control. But the jury could not understand the design
in detail because the text was in Japanese. This project was
not eligible for a prize because of its origins outside the
commonwealth.
In Conclusion
This competition (the only one of its kind) has proved so
successful that all jury members thought that the Commonwealth
Association of Architects might consider expanding its terms
of reference to allow students from all over the world to
enter. While appreciating that this would cause problems,
the jury suggests that such a widening of horizons would stimulate
quality even further.
Submissions in the sixth competition were received from as
far afield as Japan and Germany, Turkey and Vietnam. Luckily,
none of these was short-listed for a prize, but the problem
can only become more acute in years to come.
Philip Kungu (CAA President, Kenya)
Patrick Stanigar (Jamaica)
Mira Fassler-Kamstra (South Africa)
Peter Davey (United Kingdom –
Jury chairman)
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